ognarev's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Klaxxon]

Title screen design is weird and load my cpu asap.
My mac is start burning from start.
I can’t understand goal. Do I need just fly till crush?
Why I can’t fly up? It’s a jet so will be logical to fly up as for me.
I can’t predict where will be better to fly. So it looks like a total luck with no strategy.
I think must be some weapon to destroy obstacles. Then you will be able to use bonuses for reload weapon and upgrade.
So I think you need to improve it and it can be cool.
Good luck.

[Monster Squad 3]

thank you for sound off button from start.
Title screen is usual. Sure characters looks professionally done but overall screen design is mess and not so good. Logo is weak as for me.
Oh, man, in game GUI is weird. You need to hire GUI designer for correct gets redesign. Most of the gameplay in menu so they need to be perfect. They are not perfect at all for now.
I try to fight but it looks so so boring. Characters are small and placed in sides of the screen, why? Main screen GUI is bad also.
Can’t say anything about game balance and fiches.
Best regards and wish you tune up your game.

[Asteroid Kid]

Title screen is stylish and interesting.
Gameplay is simple and addictive but controls are not good.
Why I move back when moving down. I think you no need to rotate hero when change moving direction.
Must be more obvious what changes when you involve new asteroids characteristics.
“next” isn't perfect goal for level complete. Find something more interesting, maybe hole or gate…
It can be good if you fix controls.
Good luck.

MapleLeafGames responds:

Gravity

[Doge (Beta test)]

Title screen design is awful! Why did you set so Gigantic screen size?
Ok, I opened endless mode and touched one smile and die at once! Wow! So cruel, one smile killed me at once.
No, man, this is crap for now :)
But. I try again and blue mouth fire is cool, really cool. And burning smiles cool also. So maybe you will be able to do something good with this.
But controls are awful, graphics are masterfully awful and gameplay... ok, there no gameplay for now only death :)
Good luck and sure continue creating games.

AndrewMunoz responds:

thanks man. all feedback is accepted. ideas for full game can be sent too my bussuiness gmail at [e-mail]

[Shuriken]

Basic idea is ok and can be interesting.
Gameplay seems very simple but it not work for me.
Why I dying so fast?
What this big and the same numbers mean?
Graphics are not good. Background too distracting and looks too similar to obstacles. Green tree is absolutely wrong as obstacle as for me.
I think this game need more work to be playable.
Will be cool to see some obstacles that can be crashed :)
Good luck.

DnLSTUDIOS responds:

Thanks for the review, i will fix it.
1) the numbers are how many candies did you get(upper left) an how point do you have(upper right).
2)I'm not an artist and i'm not in a team so the graphics are bad.

[Captain Flamethrower visits the Abortion Clinic]

Title screen awful and great at the same time :)
fonts and overall design awful
character, babe animations and music just great and play together just perfect! So maybe it was your idea about trashy style design.
Delete “press space to begin” when game is loading.
Tutorial screen disappear before I read it. I think will be better to add close button so player can close it when read.
I moved character left and disappear…not cool.
I can’t understand why Game Over came? I burn out everyone and move on elevator and then boom! and Game Over wtf?
Overall gameplay boring. I need some aggressive doctors with can hurts me or something like that. Add more obstacles and limited resources for better gameplay.
As about good sides - they all burn great :) And black corpses left.
Make it more polish and it will be good.
I wish you good luck and waiting for updates.

TheMillz responds:

Nice catch on the walk left, I'll fix that right now. Loading screen too. As for game over that's only because you ran out of time, gather the clock objects to add random time

[I Am Death and Fire]

This game have cool new idea about dragons :) and it's cool.
But character control must be tuned up. Control is a bit weird as for me.
Graphic and animations good but I prefer bigger people characters and more interesting buildings and weapons. Peoples death isn't obvious now. I mean they must burn and explode more intense interesting.
So I think it's great prototype and it can be converted to great and addictive game with upgrades, achievements and interesting levels.
I wish you good luck with this game.

[50 Targets]

Addictive but gameplay is boring after several minutes of play. Graphics and music are ok. I think some achievements, power ups and fun animations can be helpful.

[Behave in Elevator]

This is not a game on my thought but a learning tool. Graphics and animations are good, music and sounds also. But no gameplay. You just learn what to do and that's all.

[Frogged]

My congratulations! One of the most original Breakout reincarnations through last year's. Great idea and smooth realisation.
Strong game for classic lovers:)