ognarev's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ninja Run]

Ugly characters design and animations :) Do you think ninja looks like this, really? )) They looks like they have full pants of shit. GUI looks bad also.
But to be true it works. At last you can play it so 2 for now.
Other then that nothing interesting.

sharkpie responds:

These ninjas shop at 21st century ninja shop where you can get ultra tight ninja outfits for extra speed. Based on Olympic runners' and swimmers' designs ( true story ).

They would leave your grandpa ninjas in loose outfits in the dust.

[Starry Light]

Interesting and fresh idea with controls. Cool.
Screens size looks weird on my macbook :(
I like cool disco music and positive main character also.

WatermelonGames responds:

Hi! I've fixed the resolution so it should fit the Newgrounds frame better, try it out and see if it's better! :)

[Puzzler]

I think this is Avoider game more than Puzzler game. Because path is obvious you just need to move ball careful. Graphics are boring and depressive.
It can be not bad time killer if you create some interesting backgrounds and effects.
Good luck.

figuresoft responds:

Thank you. :) I know its not really a puzzle game, but the name was just a placeholder and just ended up sticking. :)

[THE SHOT CLOCK - 60 SEC]

I don't know what's wrong with it but I try to hit and can't do it. I try again and no result again. No fun. I just feel that I can't do it and don't understand how to fix it. And this is from first level. Not cool. You need to do something with controls. Maybe start with something not so complex from start.
And please don't say that I need to do that and then that. No, it's just don't work now.
When you move hero to the left side you can leave screen and can't come back - bug.
Menu + GUI are ugly.
Animations rough and jerking.
Not good for now as for me.

JayStilla responds:

I am Going To Replace This Version with an Updated Version That Will Address All of The issue you listed in your review. i appreciate the feedback and hope to hear what you think of the upcoming update.

[Don't Touch the Pixel!]

Level menu is awful! Create start level by clicking on Level button and delete Play button. This is really disappointing.
Gameplay is cool, simple and addictive.
I suggest to change Time numbers to Time bar. It will be simpler for player. Sure you can add numbers also.
It can be 4 if you create good Title, Menu, Levels screens and in game GUI. Idea is cool.
Good luck.

MRindependent responds:

If you would start in the random place on the screen, you would die at the beggining in some levels. When you start a stage with a pointer in the middle of the screen you can play instantly. Thanks for the tip anyways :)

[Sus Barbatus]

Graphics and setting can be interesting but not perfect for now. I like hungry men :) they are funny.
Controls are weak. Jump isn't good. You just fly not jump. But hero is pig, right? So he must jump.Backgrounds are boring as for me. You can create something much more interesting in current setting.
So work it more and it will be good.

Dryhammer responds:

Thanks for your feedback. What do you mean, weak controls? How could we improve them? The fly jump was inspired from other platformers, otherwise we would've done it differently. About the background, what would you suggest to put there?

[Economics Flashcards]

Very specific educational application. Sure it is not a game.
In Flash Cards I suggest to move Next button to the right side.
In Quiz you can colour answer buttons in some colour different from question background colour.
Ask someone for help with GUI.
Good luck.

FreeEconHelp responds:

Thanks for the comment!
Those are good ideas, I will work on improving it!

[Pacman 3D]

It is not better than 2D. Anyway you play on small 2D map.
You can create normal Pacman with small 3D view and it will be better then that.
Nothing new in gameplay.

PaulHTML5 responds:

It's not really supposed to be better than the 2D version, it's just a different take on a classic game. The 2D version has been done plenty of times before. The minimap is supposed to be used for reference if needed, rather than playing the game on it.

[Elude and Collect]

Game freeze a bit when I pick up coin. I think it must be fixed.
Graphics and GUI are poor but not ugly.
Nothing new as for me.

rikerag responds:

Thank for the comment, i check for performance issues.

[Obamapology: Term 2]

Are you kidding? Why loading take so long?
Stupid idea and weak graphics, poor level design.
Are you sure you want to create games? Maybe political cartoons will be better.

sapperengineer responds:

It was made in about 48 hours bro.