ognarev's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Monkey VS Aliens]

Cool art. But gameplay is poor. I think with tuned up enemies it can be much more playable. Enemies killing me from top and I can't kill them. This is very distracting. You must create some border for enemies or get hero ability to fire in top direction also.

aliceperdomoDev responds:

Hi, good suggestions. I'll keep them in mind.

[Smarty Test]

Title screen is good. Simple and direct with no garbage.
Main screen is good also.
I took test with no problem.
Maybe add some cool character for final screen?
Are questions always the same? If yes it's not cool and too simple.
But anyway this is good job.

aliceperdomoDev responds:

Thanks !

[Slow Mustache]

ok, I understood that this is your first game but please delete this text description from start. Let’s play not read.
Exit don’t work, why?
First level.
Hardcore from start. I even can’t pass first obstacles. Dying again and again. I think you need to do smooth hardness level up. Start from something simple. Obstacles falling too fast and hero die from first touch. It’s not fun.
And please create correct screen size for web version.

DrinKadriu responds:

Thank you for your review.And im sorry if the text was frustrating, i will try to make the levels easier.

[We Broke Up]

I can see only title screen with game title and made by Belka Cat.
No buttons, no GUI, nothing happen...

peaumur responds:

Which browser do you use?
Loading bar on the loading screen is shown when at least something have been loaded. If you see only loading screen without bar - maybe you have problems with your net?

[Asteroid Kid]

Title screen is stylish and interesting.
Gameplay is simple and addictive but controls are not good.
Why I move back when moving down. I think you no need to rotate hero when change moving direction.
Must be more obvious what changes when you involve new asteroids characteristics.
“next” isn't perfect goal for level complete. Find something more interesting, maybe hole or gate…
It can be good if you fix controls.
Good luck.

MapleLeafGames responds:

Gravity

[Doge (Beta test)]

Title screen design is awful! Why did you set so Gigantic screen size?
Ok, I opened endless mode and touched one smile and die at once! Wow! So cruel, one smile killed me at once.
No, man, this is crap for now :)
But. I try again and blue mouth fire is cool, really cool. And burning smiles cool also. So maybe you will be able to do something good with this.
But controls are awful, graphics are masterfully awful and gameplay... ok, there no gameplay for now only death :)
Good luck and sure continue creating games.

AndrewMunoz responds:

thanks man. all feedback is accepted. ideas for full game can be sent too my bussuiness gmail at [e-mail]

[Shuriken]

Basic idea is ok and can be interesting.
Gameplay seems very simple but it not work for me.
Why I dying so fast?
What this big and the same numbers mean?
Graphics are not good. Background too distracting and looks too similar to obstacles. Green tree is absolutely wrong as obstacle as for me.
I think this game need more work to be playable.
Will be cool to see some obstacles that can be crashed :)
Good luck.

DnLSTUDIOS responds:

Thanks for the review, i will fix it.
1) the numbers are how many candies did you get(upper left) an how point do you have(upper right).
2)I'm not an artist and i'm not in a team so the graphics are bad.

[Captain Flamethrower visits the Abortion Clinic]

Title screen awful and great at the same time :)
fonts and overall design awful
character, babe animations and music just great and play together just perfect! So maybe it was your idea about trashy style design.
Delete “press space to begin” when game is loading.
Tutorial screen disappear before I read it. I think will be better to add close button so player can close it when read.
I moved character left and disappear…not cool.
I can’t understand why Game Over came? I burn out everyone and move on elevator and then boom! and Game Over wtf?
Overall gameplay boring. I need some aggressive doctors with can hurts me or something like that. Add more obstacles and limited resources for better gameplay.
As about good sides - they all burn great :) And black corpses left.
Make it more polish and it will be good.
I wish you good luck and waiting for updates.

TheMillz responds:

Nice catch on the walk left, I'll fix that right now. Loading screen too. As for game over that's only because you ran out of time, gather the clock objects to add random time

[Breakthrou]

One of my all time favorites!

You did great game. I saw so much ugly games about "jump&crush" but your game very fresh and cool.
- Simple and addicting Gameplay.
- Fun game art and animations.
- Great music and sound FX.
And I like main hero head :)
Good luck and my congratualtions.

I-smel responds:

Yeah I'm really bored of games where you set the angle, set the power an let go.
Also I hate upgrades, they just make everything more unfair.